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Good job telling a complete story in 90 seconds. What also stands out is the jazzy score. Bravo!

Fantastic in its conception and execution, this piece is reminiscent of the great, classic animations I spent hours watching as a kid, when they had Warner Bros. and MGM animations from the 1930s-'50s rerunning in the afternoons on TV, after school.

This tune might work better as the soundtrack for a lunch service at a busy eatery.

Great pilot! I'd love to guest VA in a subsequent episode.

It's Tex Avery meets Don Martin. Bravo!

Bravo to everyone who worked on this project! It's an impressive array of talent & creativity on display. I look forward to the next one.

I watched all the way through, uninterrupted, which is a testament to this project's brilliance. There were no weak points and no slackening of pace. The parade of gags was relentless, yet constantly inventive. I never knew what to expect next. And this is all coming out of a simple premise of a basic buddy/caper story. The sound-track fit perfectly, too. This is easily five stars from me and one of my all-time favorites.

Great illustration of subverted expectations. I figured it'd go in an unexpected direction, but not this unexpected. Well done!

This was a well-made anime style narrative. I have the same note as the previous reviewer. The credits were missing the cast--they did a great job, deserving of mention. At least list them in the description below the video. I'm a voice-actor myself, so this is a faux pas with me and why I'm not giving you more than four stars. So please include your cast in the credits in subsequent narrative projects.

Update: Thanks for the clarification. Don't forget to credit yourself & your wife, then, in that area. I bumped up my score of your piece. You & your wife did great with the VA.

lpart responds:

The voices were all done by me, with the acceptation of my wife who voiced Emma

This was brilliantly made, and the plot took some refreshingly unexpected turns. The visuals, cast and music all came together with solid writing. This is the kind of project I'd love to be cast in. I hope the series continues, and I can get a chance to try out.

I work freelance as an actor, photographer, graphic designer and occasional writer.

Colin Hussey @makestuff

Age 61, Male

actor, photographer,

San Francisco

Joined on 9/29/14

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