This was a well-made anime style narrative. I have the same note as the previous reviewer. The credits were missing the cast--they did a great job, deserving of mention. At least list them in the description below the video. I'm a voice-actor myself, so this is a faux pas with me and why I'm not giving you more than four stars. So please include your cast in the credits in subsequent narrative projects.
Update: Thanks for the clarification. Don't forget to credit yourself & your wife, then, in that area. I bumped up my score of your piece. You & your wife did great with the VA.