Great job with the twist at the end. It was totally unexpected.
Great job with the twist at the end. It was totally unexpected.
Hai... Thanks.
i was afraid it was expected
Good job telling a complete story in 90 seconds. What also stands out is the jazzy score. Bravo!
Fantastic in its conception and execution, this piece is reminiscent of the great, classic animations I spent hours watching as a kid, when they had Warner Bros. and MGM animations from the 1930s-'50s rerunning in the afternoons on TV, after school.
This tune might work better as the soundtrack for a lunch service at a busy eatery.
Great pilot! I'd love to guest VA in a subsequent episode.
It's Tex Avery meets Don Martin. Bravo!
Bravo to everyone who worked on this project! It's an impressive array of talent & creativity on display. I look forward to the next one.
I watched all the way through, uninterrupted, which is a testament to this project's brilliance. There were no weak points and no slackening of pace. The parade of gags was relentless, yet constantly inventive. I never knew what to expect next. And this is all coming out of a simple premise of a basic buddy/caper story. The sound-track fit perfectly, too. This is easily five stars from me and one of my all-time favorites.
Great illustration of subverted expectations. I figured it'd go in an unexpected direction, but not this unexpected. Well done!
This was a well-made anime style narrative. I have the same note as the previous reviewer. The credits were missing the cast--they did a great job, deserving of mention. At least list them in the description below the video. I'm a voice-actor myself, so this is a faux pas with me and why I'm not giving you more than four stars. So please include your cast in the credits in subsequent narrative projects.
Update: Thanks for the clarification. Don't forget to credit yourself & your wife, then, in that area. I bumped up my score of your piece. You & your wife did great with the VA.
The voices were all done by me, with the acceptation of my wife who voiced Emma
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