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This was a well-made anime style narrative. I have the same note as the previous reviewer. The credits were missing the cast--they did a great job, deserving of mention. At least list them in the description below the video. I'm a voice-actor myself, so this is a faux pas with me and why I'm not giving you more than four stars. So please include your cast in the credits in subsequent narrative projects.

Update: Thanks for the clarification. Don't forget to credit yourself & your wife, then, in that area. I bumped up my score of your piece. You & your wife did great with the VA.

lpart responds:

The voices were all done by me, with the acceptation of my wife who voiced Emma

Kudos to your team for this cool, well-illustrated story. Even if it was a bit long, the pacing was such that it didn't feel that way. And bravo to my VA colleague, Nick!

Schwanemann responds:

yeah, everyone who worked on this were coocoo-bonanas. And I don't say that lightly.

Wow! This is visually striking and shows a sureness with your execution of this project. The music backs up the story well, too. Bravo!

D-slick responds:

Bro thank you so much! I'm really glad.

"Fine! More Heaven for me." That's my favorite line and why I'm giving it more than four stars.

Tiltro responds:

Yippee, thank you

It's intriguing, conceptually, and the cinematography is another positive. The 3D animation needs refinement. It's not yet as strong as the 2D work.

AguRex responds:

Yeah ... That's true. I want to perfect my 3d Animation skill but want it to look 2d.

Might take a couple of trys.

I liked the opening titles, but I stopped watching after 1:30. The voice acting, both in line delivery and recording, is so lacking in quality that I just couldn't stand to listen to it. The two characters at the beginning sounded fuzzy and computer generated--perplexing, since there's no shortage of outstanding voice acting talent on this platform.

I advise checking out the recent Newgrounds Voice Acting Collaboration: https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1093895 . There's a tremendous talent pool to draw upon for future projects--or even a redux of this one with new audio. Profile links are available in the Credits & Info column, so don't hesitate to reach out to any who might fit the characters.

YouTubular responds:

You know that those sections were TTS, not voice acting, right?

The aesthetic of the piece worked well in depicting the brutal depths of the fashion world in this cautionary tale of destructive dreams & desperation in a big city.

RistoKy responds:

I'm So Truly Glad, that there are People who get this! :)
Thank You so Very Much! :)

I'm glad to have been part of this impressive showcase of animators, voice actors and sound design. Great work, everyone!

DannyGoodShirt responds:

Thanks Overseer!

I love the references to classic cartoons, like Dick Dastardly & Muttley and Wile E. Coyote.

squeakytoad responds:

Thanks, Colin, grew up on those toons!

Well done with the animation. Quite a change-up the big guy throws.

SuperJeffoMan responds:

Thank you, lol yeah a little twist at the end there.

I work freelance as an actor, photographer, graphic designer and occasional writer.

Colin Hussey @makestuff

Age 60, Male

actor, photographer,

San Francisco

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